All Comments on 'The Stand-In'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Stand-In

A his-hers POV is interesting. The transitions between the viewpoints are cumbersome and difficult to deal with as they're not defined.

I'm never sure what the contest is, if' it's golf, tennis, or the dancing. Are the other competitors married, or at least in secure relationships or are they also mixed partners? Some definition would improve this story.

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