All Comments on 'The Start'

Rife with errors. And try actual dialogue.

Both the writing and the story. Good thing it's a girlfriend. It costs nothing to throw her out.

But I got most of what you where getting across. Don't stop, tell us more, just take your time and get someone to edit it. Reread it. I want to know how long you have been a wimp cuckold? Did she ever get gang banged? DP and loaded up by real man cocks till she was dripping? You ever get to watch?