All Comments on 'The Statue Game'

This is an incredible story! I loved it! Five Stars and favorited!

Lovely,sexy,written with passion. 5stars!

Beautifully written with a combination of sensuality and raw desire. So many men in this situation want mom but few get the opportunity to act.

Most of your stories are ok,

but this one takes the prize.

Are 5 stars ok, hell no!!!!,

maybe 10 is more like it.

..THANKS Great job..

USAF

Wow. 4+ pages of sustained action in a single scene, more or less, and beautifully crafted all the way through. Well done. :)

Great build up, I really appreciate that you did not rush it. Unfortunately it's a trap that 90% of writers were fall into but you absolutely nailed it.

Great job! Great story telling. I'm excited to read more from you.

Perfect

I have read a lot of stories over the years, but this story is amazing. I suspect some professor will be tempted to use it in class.

From the premise to the exquisite storytelling, this one is a true winner! Thank you so much for writing and sharing such a beautiful mother/son love story. Absolutely one of my favourites on the site and will undoubtedly remain so.

My suspicion is that Grandma is the school principal, and the security tape of the entire incident is sitting in her locked office.

The fact of the new security system is unknown to employees at this time, but will be revealed at the staff conference at 8 pm tonight.

What games does Finn have to play to save his mom's job and reputation?

Its stories like these that have stopped me from looking up generic porn videos. The sex in those videos pale in comparison to the passion and challenge you are able to extract through your storytelling. The build-up and the way you make the scenarios seem believable is an art unto itself.

Thank you.

Lovely story, well told.

Very narrative and lovingly hot story. Rated 5*. Fucking own beautiful mother in her own kindergarten class is very hot idea.

Brilliant story

Wish I could give 6*

First rate erotica. You paced it perfectly and never once had me lose interest; snappy, teasing dialogue...fun. And very hot. Like eating an artichoke...one leaf at a time, working perfectly to a melting center.

Thank you so much for writing it.

5 stars!

Bob

I absolutely love this story! Please write a second chapter.

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Absolutely exceptional story. Five stars and also bonus point for the bush and panties. Those two are so much hotter then shaven/thong/g-string, I really don't know why everybody is so obsessed with them

Very very hot! Good build up. More please?!

Beautiful story. Well paced and detailed. Yes, it was similar to the Robot Game (one of my very favorites), but also very different.

I'm not one for anal (my experience was painful for everyone), but for me that was only a small part of an excellent story. The only thing I might very gently and respectfully suggest is spelling out glissando rather than as we see it on the sheet music.

TOO short on dialogue on her part. There's more on the details of the game than her!

Silly story but hot & erotic.

My only complaint is that I couldn't find that sixth star I was sure Literotica would have provided after a story as wonderful and hot as this one!

What are these authors thinking?? Fucking my mom in the Cunt???? Who even thinks like this even in fantasy?? The word cunt has absolutely NO erotic feel to it what so ever!! Try as they might, it never will have!! Women, who at a guess, make up about 30% of your readers absolutely hate the word. My opinion is it just shows disrespect to the fairer sex. They are human beings and enjoy sex just like the rest of us and don't deserve disrespect for it!! Yeah, yeah, maybe I'm just an old man.....

I just sent a comment on the word cunt. Yeah, but in the end the story turned out quite well.

yes make love to your mother to your woman seduce her slow be gentle be loving deep very deep, her bed your bed lovers

the build up in the story was fantastic. very hot!!

So tender and beautiful. The beginning of a deep, lifelong, intimate relationship, filled with love, romance and hot, sweaty sex, of course. It's a shame it ended too soon. They have a whole lifetime of love ahead and we don't get to read about it. :( No doubt his mother would bear him children and their wounds, particularly hers, about losing the dad would fully heal. Then they would raise their children and build a lifetime of memories to reminisce upon when they're older, which we would hear more about as they spoil their grandchildren in the epilogue. Yeah, I've seen stories that go that way. And yeah, they're awesome, though quite rare from what I've found, sadly.

Beautiful story. The build up was so natural and their hesitations just melted away in such a believable way. One the best and I’m glad I found it.