All Comments on 'The Step Mom Pt. 04'

You have me hooked on this series.

Thanks linnear. Glad you are enjoying it. It’s been fun writing it. Part 5 is in the works!

First sentence and you can't be bothered to Proof Read even that far??

"... stopped checking to SEW ...."?

“Proof Read” doesn’t need to be capitalized.

I assume "SEW" was all caps to show you which word he was talking about. I also noticed that, plus a couple of other words as I have read through these stories. Truth be told, he is basically right. You should re-read each story before submitting them. Run them through a "grammar" search engine and spell check. Your stories are short (those are the type I like) so it shouldn't take long to do all this. I knew I needed to do this on the couple of stories I have submitted because "English" was my worst subject in school.

That said, keep up the stories. I am enjoying them.

you are really good at this thanks 100% HOT