All Comments on 'The Step Mom'

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Turbulence1973Turbulence1973almost 5 years ago

Oh there needs to be more to this. Much more.

OttawaGuy50sOttawaGuy50salmost 5 years agoAuthor
More to come

I have several rough drafts Turbulance - Stay tuned.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Could have been a 5 except

32C is anything but tiny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
more needed!

I think she needs to get back on that sun-lounger, lay back and let her stepson have his way with her. Also, 32c isn't small, it's average - just right.

yangus99yangus99almost 5 years ago
30 and 22?

This is a great story but if she was like 45, it would be better. They are 8 years apart, he is hardly a young guy to her.

Papa4dauPapa4daualmost 5 years ago
More

Definately need more good beginning . she needs to catch him now .

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Border Line Boring***

Well written but just weak. Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
needs much work

Mother and father 21 year age difference? How often do we see this but in the movies?

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 5 years ago
Masterfully crafted

Perfect setting, perfect story.

BigPopsBigPopsalmost 5 years ago
responding to anonymous

have you not heard of "trophy wives" - more common than you might think.

and the stepson seems to be in for some fun.

CletisCletisalmost 5 years ago
BigPops is right

My stepmom is 11 years older than I and 12 years younger than my Dad. Unfortunately, they don't have a pool, so never caught her playing beside it in her 2 piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too many mistakes

You need to read it before you post.

She lounge by the pool. No, she lounged by the pool.

She slide her hand. No, she slid

her hand..

It's not a lounge it's a lounger.

Silly mistakes that spoil what could have been a good story.

I hope you improve in part two.

horny2doithorny2doitabout 4 years ago

Yes, all the right ingredients -- young horny step-mom, horny step-son and the opportunity to show him what she does. Now, how will the step-son exploit this ?? Is his cock long and thick, will he say anything to encourage her ??? So many possibilities. Maybe, they'll masterbate together and then go forward ?? So many great opportunities here. Cannot wait for more.

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