All Comments on 'The Stepfather Chronicles'

More please!

Wrong. This is even better than "Wrong". I'm literally drooling at the possibilities this story has to offer. I can hardly wait ;)

I loved this one ... keep it going ...

keep going

And mussed down, then up then out, winding up the same, only roundabout. Thats the stepfather hokey-pokey! Sometimes it takes two of kind to tantalize & kick lust into motion.

That was delicious. So naughty, carnal and animalistic. Fuck that was hot!

Good men are not rapists. Good women are not sluts. It is that simple.

Good buildup, will there be more anytime soon? And please being back Tate & Johanna already, you ended it right when it was getting hot! And bring back Wrong too!

If you're going to write as a woman, don't use the word "cunt". Even the most filthy mouthed women hate that term.

Very exquisite!

All the pieces and the sum of the whole, rattle my bones and resonate deep inside.

Thank you.

PS: Do you walk like you talk?

The best I can do to describe this, is a "play on words". For, there would be no other way to do so! This was HOT and chilling at the same time. Please give us more, so we could, at least, have another chance to figure out what it is. Thanks!

And Insanely HOT!

No one should speak for all women.

He's not her father. How is it incest? Otherwise I liked the story, even the unwilling (?) partner part.

You described them as one fucked up family right from the beginning. How could anyone get turned on for that. Couldn't get past the first half page.

YES!!!!! That was quite good. And freaking HOT!