All Comments on 'The Stirrings of a Cold Heart'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 3 years ago

Interesting story!

5

A_BierceA_Bierceabout 3 years ago

Cries out for more

A brilliant start for what could be a stirring romance that touches someone who thought he was untouchable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sorry I could only give 5 stars.

stewartbstewartbabout 3 years ago

This young princess deserves to have her story continued.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 3 years ago
One word!

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Perhaps a future meeting?

KTD2020KTD2020about 3 years ago

More, please! This demands more chapters. What does the mark mean? How does Dark Heart help the girl?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it!! More please. Especially more chapters

vhasstvhasstabout 3 years ago

This is beautiful both in treatment and in writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.

SithLord6969SithLord6969about 3 years ago

Damn you're good!

A most excellent beginning

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What a brilliant start! It looks very promising, looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

EddieValientEddieValientabout 3 years ago

Love the begining....so many possible dirrections.....can't wait to read the rest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Have read all thus far of The Fallen Queen of Eden and needed more! It’s here! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Super excited to dive into this story! So far so good! Thank you for writing :)

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