by Ohzee44
Cries out for more
A brilliant start for what could be a stirring romance that touches someone who thought he was untouchable.
More, please! This demands more chapters. What does the mark mean? How does Dark Heart help the girl?
This is beautiful both in treatment and in writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.
What a brilliant start! It looks very promising, looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
Love the begining....so many possible dirrections.....can't wait to read the rest
Have read all thus far of The Fallen Queen of Eden and needed more! It’s here! Thank you.
Super excited to dive into this story! So far so good! Thank you for writing :)