All Comments on 'The Storm'

The sexiest and most tender story I have ever read. The raw emotion and power in it were unbelievable.

This story is a wonderful example of the connection between sex and love and how each both compliments and enhances the other. The little details about the characters and their surroundings gave the story a sense of reality not often found in erotica. Very nice work!

That was an amazing story ! That made me remember my lover and how much I love her. Simply amazing :)

Just an astonishingly beautiful piece. Tender, sweet, very sexy, and that perennial feeling of 'if only I could make her see how attractive she is in my eyes'.

Simply lovely.

Beautifully written , no errors I noticed. Loved the way you told the story and how you provided a brief history of their life before their cohabiting life as partners with a child in the waiting.

5🌟's.

Soulmates are the perfect match and thats the reason we all are hopping around like maniacs, searching for that one soul ….. so lovely so wonderful heart filling

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