All Comments on 'The Story of Lanyon and Henry'

Wow fantastic well done

Well that was different! Really enjoyed it!

I have read over 2000 stories on Literotica (yes over 2000) but his is the weirdest one I have ever read riveting BUT oh so weird Do not think I will read any more of your offerings Sorry (jaybee186)

A stilted rambling narration which I lost interest in after the second page. 1 star at best!

The Victorian prose worked it made it so bloody hard to read I gave up.

Is it only me or did any others pick up the familiar storyline. The names give it away so much so. New twists to an old theme.

I wonder what Ms. Hyde will be like?

Huge mistake changing the horror category to LW, the very low rating is saying it loud enough.

If this was a rewrite, I'm glad I never saw the original mess. I wish you had picked a better category and I had never seen this version either.

A little peculiar, but I finished it.

Remarkable story, told from the imaginations of an over-active mind. I think Poe would approve. The timeline was a bit confusing, but then I suppose it would have to be. Hard to follow sometimes as it twisted and turned, but it came together (altho her dad the Colonel never got cured). Would love to see a continuance but it's far beyond my capabilities to write it.

stopped at the begging of 2nd page. Boring

Okay!

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