All Comments on 'The Story Teller'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow!!! what an awesome story

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Epitome of Love

So much love inside mom to want son inside her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow great story, hope there's some more

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 2 years ago

Great story, not a fan of the pregnancy thing, but it is your story and your fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i loved the introduction and the clever way she wrote the story. Well done.

withinreasonwithinreasonover 2 years ago

Excellent, original and hot.

CriosCriosover 2 years ago

Wonderful story! The buildup makes it oh so hot. Thank you for sharing!

justwarped2018justwarped2018over 2 years ago

That was amazing, so naughty and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

liked the story could have keep the PG out of it just made like any other run of the mill mother son story. big let own after the nice work before hand.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Great tale

I loved your story.

I see you don't give your location, but it became clear and cheered me up to seeing she had a fanny. Nice to read a story by an author in my country.

I'm going to read other stories of yours that I have missed.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting behind-the-scenes look, at a writers submissions to this site. Loved that angle and the way you took it.... and once again the absolute lack of physical character description, left that to the reader, THANK YOU!!!!

5stars again

whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

I loved the plot, very well written. I would use the word inventive to describe it.

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

WOW

Wonderful ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this! The build up is perfect and I liked the ending too. Thank you

Lngisland2txLngisland2txover 1 year ago

I think it's fantastic I had to stay up late to finish it. I masturbated 3 times, please keep the stories coming. I would have loved to be able to say that I slept with my mother.

Thank you again.

TheOldStudTheOldStudover 1 year ago

Very nice, but the ending seemed rushed...still 5/5!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Lovely, wonderful, well written!!! 5/5

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