All Comments on 'The Stranger at the Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Editor needed

"the guy was saying to the guy" should be "the guy was saying to the girl/gal"

'prize', not 'price'

Just an ok story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
sorry

not much. You really REALLY need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Total Load of Fucking Crap

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

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