All Comments on 'The Stranger in the Night'

4 Stars. Not sure where this story is going, there's not a lot to work with here. You needed to put in some teasers to keep your readers interested enough to WANT TO COME BACK.

4 Stars. Not sure where this story is going, there's not a lot to work with here. You needed to put in some teasers to keep your readers interested enough to WANT TO COME BACK.

Unlike above, I want to come back! Loved what you wrote here, 5 stars. Left me right on the edge and waiting for part 2!

So fucking goood

the same old thing women like being raped crap