All Comments on 'The Stranger Inside Me'

by twofingermagictrick

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Not2PervyNot2Pervyabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story! I see you only ever wrote this one. Hope you found what you were looking for by posting it. I feel like the male version of the main character. If only…

LustyLadyLaceyLustyLadyLaceyover 8 years ago
inspiring

This story makes me want to be a writer (and also be fucked mostly)

Your ability to paint a scene and keep the reader there makes me

Feel like you are sitting next to me in a theatre whispering to me this story

In my ear Seeing how long it takes for it to affect me. Needless to say i favorited this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really great

This is one of the best stories I've read in awhile. Super hot, good pacing (not too slow) and you are very good at painting a picture with words :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

One of the best stories I've read, if not the best. Thank you.

cindylynn34cindylynn34over 8 years ago

very good twofinger..

LadyCharlyLadyCharlyover 8 years ago
Classic

My awakening also. Secrets burried... deep inside... are the best.

Here's to your new friday night knick-knack ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
excellent

An excellent first story.

Keep writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh my gosh!!!

Fantastic!!! Seriously....one of the best I've read. Well-written, good grammar, enough back story, but not too much. And, you couldn't have described better how I regard myself. Uncanny. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Without doubt the best 'first story' I have read here. Hell, one of the best erotic short stories I've read here or anywhere else for that matter.

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