by R410a
Flawless, as usual. Thanks, once again, for your time and effort. Well-developed characters, strong back stories, simple plot and a bit of humor. Good sense of time and place. Bottom line : another good romance story.
Great story really enjoyed learning about the characters and reading your lovely story
Short and sweet was right, loved the story. I did think the police went a little overboard about a shot out street light, but it worked out in the end. Sad about AnneMarie, but sometimes life deals you a rotten hand you have to deal with. Five stars and thanks.
I enjoyed it. Sounds like he was divorced when his ex offed herself, so not really a widow. (I know, cutting hairs.) I do wish they would have adopted or something, seems like a mundane existence otherwise. 4.5*
"That's the best lay I've had in years. - not very erotic. Didn't really feel the passion or affection.
Sweet corn, and a sweet story. As usual R410a, you hit the nail on the head. Thanks.
What a yarn spinner and master romantic! Loved every word of it. Looking forward to the next R410a fantasy to show up in my Following List!
Take care my friend.
Cheers
SAGE
You are a master of creating believable dialog, which many here on Lit are not.
Enjoyed reading this one, and have appropriately awarded you all possible.