All Comments on 'The Strippers and the Stepson Ch. 02'

by roxymoves

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kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 4 years ago

Excellent! It was way over the top, pure fantasy, but fucking good fantasy at that! I enjoyed every word, well written, and a very horny subject. 5 Stars from me.

ualmech88ualmech88almost 4 years ago
Great follow up

Great work and a fabulous stroke story which is the main point I'm sure.

The right mix of kink and depth for so many characters. Keep those dirty thoughts flowing. Five stars.

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Step son needs to give mom as baby bump

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So sucking fucking hot and depraved.

Omg the lucky fuckers, absolutely gorged on cunt, fucking it sucking it. I absolutely adore cunt and cunt juice and can not get enough. What would I not give to join these cunt and cock crazed cunts in an orgy like this.

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous, I agree--everyone needs a good orgy now and then. Why didn' t they invite us? ;-) Thanks for reading my work! -Roxy

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Hi Dunkirk, It seems like someone's going to get knocked up. Between Karen & Eric, and Suzanne & Ryan (ch 2), the odds are starting to weigh in that favor. Stay tuned... -Roxy

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear ualmech88, This chapter was a stroke story?! I think the term you were looking for is Shakespearean. ;-) Thanks for supporting me and have a great day. -Roxy

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear kennyboy82, I'm glad I could wrap you in my fantasy, if only for a little while. I think fantasy is good for the soul. And the sex life. Thanks so much for reading my work. -Roxy

HungBigBenHungBigBenalmost 4 years ago

Roxy, thank you for sharing your talent. Your writing is exceptional...a lot of twists and new experiences. Very entertaining to read. Thank you again for sharing. I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More & less

Less of the gay male stuff and more incest and girl on girl action.

Leah needs to return and both Leah and Ashley need to bring male relatives, maybe Candy & Rose bring their brother, so the women can go ski jumping, with a cock in their cunt, ass, mouth and both hands.

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Amazing Second Chapter

I think both chapters are good and want more, I'm glad you added another guy in as it would be more believable to satisfy all the women. I didn't think I would enjoy Eric getting taken by his mom in his ass but it was unbelievably hot. I'm pretty sure I'll skip over the part with the boys experimenting together, a bit to much for me.

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear Ben,

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Sincerely, Roxy

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear More & Less,

I like that idea! I think I'll try to work it in to chapter 3. I hope you like how I handle it (so to speak). Thanks for reading my stories, Roxy

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear Linnear,

I'm so glad you liked the scene between the mom, the stepson, and the giant strap-on. That scene was the idea of my editor, LaRascasse. He's also a writer on Lit and great at what he does. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it, Roxy

BlackPlumberBlackPlumberalmost 4 years ago
Story Content

Roxy

Congrats 👏 on your story......Very 🔥 hot 👍🏾.....

I know for some the male bisexuality is a turnoff....Or even disturbing.

While I don't find male on male exciting.....I know that there's an enormous number of females who do....just like I love 💘 female on female....

I think if you are feeling the story this way as you write ✍ it.....Then you should express it that way. To be fair to those whose sensibilities may be offended by such content......Just put the disclaimer at the beginning of the story so that they may move on to the story content that they enjoy 😉

Thanks for the great work you chose to share....looking forward to seeing more in the future.....

Blackplumber

roxymovesroxymovesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear BlackPlumber,

I appreciate your comments. I will definitely keep your suggestion in mind for future stories--thanks for proposing it to me.

Thank you for reading my work.

--Roxy

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