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"Oh we know Mr Hudson, he's a famous photographer." The derogatory emphasis on the word 'photographer' showed his awareness of my occupation and his dislike for the paparazzi.
"He's not just one of the paparazzi, he's a serious photographer, we've just completed an assignment for one of the country's biggest mining companies, and that's why you couldn't find us."
She held it together until we were in the car and heading for her house, but then she had to let it out. "Those stupid fucking little bitches, they've fucked him to death! I told them to stop doing it but they obviously didn't listen to me. I'll fucking kill them!"
- COMMENTS
Sidney43over 11 years agoHmmmm - I like your writing in general, but this one leaves me wanting more. There needs to be another chapter, because this just ended with his introduction as her fiance............ and??? I also think they declared their love for each other much too quickly for a person moving in her social circles. Great that he is a skilled photographer, but that is a bit of a leap.
The circumstances of the incest between Father and Daughter (s) is passing strange. He forces himself on Stephanie, but the two younger daughters force themselves on him. Also something that strains credulity.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe writing and scenario got worse the more I read. So I stopped part way into page 2. If you must play with words do so in a crossword puzzle book.
warthog50over 11 years agoEnjoyable story, but really....she could hide 3 abortions from her father but it would have been impossible to hide being on bcp's from him?? Come on, man.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI hope you are doing well and for me I continue to greatly enjoy your writing!
Alan
