All Comments on 'The Submissive Babysitter Pt. 03'

by writemarksmith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice

you are a unique writer on Literotica. Please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice

I like this story quite a lot. I hope you will keep it going enough to develop May's character more-- completely transforming her into 'The Submissive Babysitter' for sure!

Senzuri_SenseiSenzuri_Senseiover 8 years ago
Great development ... very promising!

I really like where this story is headed. I like how we're uncovering the situation from various characters' perspectives. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good!

We need more of May's adventures!

Sman4444Sman4444over 1 year ago

I like the way youslowly find out there is more to the story than you originally think.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsover 1 year ago

A very HOT MILF, A submissive Asian teen, and a wealthy, but mostly oblivious Sugar-daddy... A great formula for erotic adventure!!! Please keep this one cuming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So wonderful. So wonderful... Sorry to nitpick, but a hedge fund guy doesn’t have a driveway in Manhattan. Please do take this to express how special and wonderful this series is that this minor minor flaw stands out to me.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

How many times are you going to tell us about May and the husband?

Move on please

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