All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Bk. 02: The Twins Ch. 20'

Love your storyies. Please don't be like a ton of other writers to rush to the end. Take your time if that means montha or years do so to make this story line great so it has been for so long. A great story can goto shit in short order with a shitty ending. Thanks and keep up the good work

The best of plans can easily be side tracked when life happens. I appreciate the progress you've made on this story and I'll patiently wait for more. Thanks!

I was so excited when I saw a new chapter. Please don't hate me for admitting the ending to this one makes me extremely uncomfortable. I've been waiting for Shelly to finally catch a break and have a nice ending. Forcing her to carry a rape baby's a bit depressing. Would fuck her up for life. I'm hoping there's an alternative.

I agree that what I am putting Shelly through will be harsh, difficult, and extremely unfair. On the flipside, there is a story arch I have planned for her that will make her come out the other end much stronger. Unfortunately, she will go through hell first.

Oh. I see now why you made light of rape in earlier chapters.

You really should put a warning on your story. And consider stop getting the names of your characters wrong.

@Anonymous

Where did I get names wrong? I try to watch out for that, but sometimes they get jumbled in my head as I write.

I don’t think i can go any further with this story. Gross rapey shit aside, the characters are all on my last nerve. Idiotic nonsensical decisions left and right. Eldon/Sheldon (I wish you would be clear on that) is fucking annoying and his sister is a total twat and selfish as fuck. I don’t even care if either of them die at this point. ALSO, the whole “bad language” thing is just….stupid.