All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Bk. 02: The Twins Ch. 29'

I bought the ebook and I really enjoyed the ending! Easily five stars.

I just wish Shelly and Elden had ended up together.

My personal taste aside, there are also many threads not finished. This book really needed at least another five chapters or so.

I know there's a third book, but the Paladin Knights have always been an uncomfortable element to me. They served a role as antagonists, but I don't think I'd read a story centered around them. Maybe if it was about Daughters of Respite, but not Paladin Knights.

@Tessaly,

I understand where you're coming from. I wanted to show my world was more than 2-dimensional, and created a story with a young Knight at the center. SPOLIER WARNING: the Knights are still bad and act as the bad guys.

I have enjoyed the story very much. But I am disappointed that there is no conclusion here. To get that conclusion I have to buy your Ebook. As the last commentor said, there are so many threads left unfinished. Great story, but disappointing at the end.

Very disappointing ending, no conclusion. I have no Idea where I can get the ebook.