by DBs_Bro
this story has been a very pleasant surprise ... most succubus stories tend to be very formulaic, and get boring very quickly ... this one is different :-) ... the characters are well thought out and believeable ... and the twists are well done also ... a few minor spelling/grammar errors
thank you for a good read :-) ... I am looking forward to more of your story :-)
Yours is the first story I read exploring the idea of a new Incubus coming to be, will he feel guilty about his action?, is the succubus/incubus thing contagious?, what will come next?
only the next great installment will tell!
Pretty much everything after Snow leaves the hospital has a dream-like quality to it. The car practically drives itself with no obvious source of power. It even tags along after him without needing to be driven. Men and women now consider him a 10, when previously he was considered a zero. Everything gets paid by someone else. Some future chapter needs to explain that this is a dream, or that someone with magical powers is watching over him.
This exploration of his, and Angela's is an adventure I can't wait to see more of. Well done and thank you for sharing.
strange reaction at the end seeing as she is alive and apparently well... but still a great story ;)