All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 02'

by DBs_Bro

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a good read :-)

this story has been a very pleasant surprise ... most succubus stories tend to be very formulaic, and get boring very quickly ... this one is different :-) ... the characters are well thought out and believeable ... and the twists are well done also ... a few minor spelling/grammar errors

thank you for a good read :-) ... I am looking forward to more of your story :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
an original aproach to an old theme

Yours is the first story I read exploring the idea of a new Incubus coming to be, will he feel guilty about his action?, is the succubus/incubus thing contagious?, what will come next?

only the next great installment will tell!

Deep SoakerDeep Soakerabout 11 years ago
The dream continues?

Pretty much everything after Snow leaves the hospital has a dream-like quality to it. The car practically drives itself with no obvious source of power. It even tags along after him without needing to be driven. Men and women now consider him a 10, when previously he was considered a zero. Everything gets paid by someone else. Some future chapter needs to explain that this is a dream, or that someone with magical powers is watching over him.

OneIBlindOneIBlindabout 11 years ago
More please...

This exploration of his, and Angela's is an adventure I can't wait to see more of. Well done and thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
awesome love it

amazing twist reading and favoriting rest

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
AWESOME

strange reaction at the end seeing as she is alive and apparently well... but still a great story ;)

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