All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great story :-D

I have been enjoying this story very much ... thank you for the very good read :-D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
awesome

love this stories kickass

theanalisttheanalistover 10 years ago

2 questions

why Angela risk herself for repairing a car by lending part of soul?

why did the faerie almost got them killed at the hands of Cyclops?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
JC's round 2

Man I do love this series, cant wait till the new chapters are out

JC

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Car

This story is great!! 14 chapters and I only have two problems witht the whole story. I hope you will explain why Angelica tied her soul to the car. Why oh why did you have him charge right at the castle when he was not in that kind of rush in any other point in the story. Thats it!! a wonderful story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
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wtf is the point of lisa and becky in this story... also, lisa and annabelle were MORE than useless on this entire trip.

LevindlLevindlover 1 year ago

I have a beef with you! You made me spit coffee all over the keyboard of my laptop from laughing so hard when you wrote the comments: “ Some irreverent part of my mind wonders why a mermaid doesn't taste fishy.“

It was such a hilarious statement! Bravo on adding the humor to that scene!

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