All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 16'

this story has been slowly turning in to one of the best stories on here ... thank you for the great read :-)

your plot is turning less interesting ,it looks like there is only sex, sex and sex,where is the story

I am enjoying your story line. Your conclusion should be pretty interesting if you try to make all the various aspects of the story conclude in a neat package.

I can understand the plot itself not being up to expectations, but saying there's too much sex? There's always the same amount of sex in every chapter. 1 scene always. A guy in the other forum said the sex wasn't cutting it lately, which is the opposite. As much as we appreciate constructive criticism, I have to shrug. You can please some of the people all of the time, or all of the people some of the time, but not all of the people all of the time. Just based on the fact that the amount of sex is the same, I don't understand the criticism, ha.

But the next 3 chapters have a lot of action and plot, if I can say so myself. Please do tell what you think!