All Comments on 'The Summer of 2004 Ch. 02'

Very hot...can't wait for Chapter 3...its torture waiting for the big moment when the two finally get it on. Sometimes a bit drawn out, but loving it just the same.

Love the story so far and the writing is superb. I'm glad there is a happy ending in Mike's future!

your dialogs (inner and outer) are excellent----but...you got mike talking to the marine (and thinking about the marine) like he's known him for weeks- when in reality they haven't even had 2 work days together yet_ so that makes all that deep dialog and emotional struggle become way over the top and very ridiculous_ even though the thoughts and emotions and dialogs are expressed wonderfully---that this guy would be in that mindset, with a guy he's spent less than 2 work days with, kinda not make sense. if you don't want to actually write about what happens while they get to know each other better- maybe add a 'time-skip' in there....'it's 3 weeks later...'__

you earlier wrote that the marine does his p.t. from 6-8 am every morning- yet when you had mike come back the 2nd day- it was 5 minutes b4 8am and mike wasn't doing his exercises and even had breakfast prepared.

I DONT KNOW WHY THE MOANING TWATS ON THIS SITE HAVE TO BITCH ABOUT A GREAT STORY LIKE THIS. I LOOK BELOW AT A FULL CHAPTER OF DOG DIRT. SHUT THE FUCK UP AND ENJOY THIS STORY AS IT WRITTIEN

Great. I love it. When I was young I met a wonderful man I thought was straight and had been a model. I was shocked when he told me he wanted to be with me. We had the interests and really were best friends. I never had an idea he also had sexual interest in me.