All Comments on 'The Summer of 2004 Ch. 04'

The chapters just keep getting better and better- thanks for the bit of kink with this installment ;)

Tried to be patient with this, but it seems you just want to tease, and that's not something I like. You also use golden showers in this part, something that disgusts me. Sorry.

(When the catcher relaxes, the third base)

i believe earlier you wrote 'when the catcher relaxes, the pitcher slides in'...which also makes more sense in a sub/dom relationship- the 'catcher' takes it and the 'pitcher' delivers it.

(Mine, a desire to share my masculinity, a desire to please )

--a sub is not so much one to share his masculinity- but more likely to surrender his masculinity_only there to pleasure and be of service to the dominant- the submissive finds pleasure in pleasing the dominant- not even their own release is as good as the pleasure they receive getting the dominant off_ like you had mike try to order bob to give mike his cock- but bob didn't like that- cause he's the one that calls the shots...if mike/submissive wants something- he begs for it- doesn't demand it. you got bob's dominant part down good_ 4 hours does seem a little excessive with the butt munching- though mike was very enthusiastic

hot oral action- and surprised by the golden showers---i don't know what that other reviewer meant by you 'teasing' and not delivering_ cause the action is pretty hot so far.

I SEE THE MOANING TWAT IS AT IT AGAIN.? SHUT THE F--K UP DICK HEAD

I am was loving this this story until the PEAING .The story is good already the golden shower was not needed. I was really into it until I read that it was a TURN OFF.

The golden shower was gross. Really ruined it for me. Good story though I keep laughing everytime Robert said ”Hoo-Rah” or ”Yee-Haw” lol. It really shows his age & is so weird its too funny.

I a big fan of golden showers but I will give to someone if they want it. I want to accommodate the other guy. Coming numerous times is not a problem. Having sex for hours is great.

Pee made some readers mad! Must be why this installment is 4.5 Stars instead of a solid 5. It’s a 5 for me because it made me laugh too. Hot. Sexy. Funny. What more could you want?