by MariaTrans694U
Love it! Absolutely fabulous! A well written story with an interesting plot and recognizable characters, good grammar and spelling. You pressed all my buttons with the detailed descriptions of all those luscious feminine underclothes, makeup, stiletto shoes and Jeremy's introduction into the world of sex--lucky Jeremy!
Please write more stories like this.
Love and kisses
Rosemary
PS At this very moment I'm wearing silky panties, a full length open bottom corselette with four garter straps, beige thigh highs, beige pumps with comfortable 2 inch heels, and a white Playtex bra with my best silicone breast inserts. I feel great.
I’ve read 6 pages so far, really good! Hope the next six are just had good! If they are hope there is a part two!!!
Really enjoyed your story, a bit over the top. But so is the movie “Pretty Woman” I’ve watched it multiple times. Hope is more Jamie stories.
This was the kind of story I love to come across and this is so well written. It was such a fun read with characters that were so real. I hope I can read more of Jamie’s story in the future.
Fantastic. A great combination of your other stories with new additions. I cannot wait for more on Jamie.
I normally criticize prose, spelling and composition of some of the stories on Literotica. This story flows nicely was put together in a logical manor without adding too much filler. Nicely written.
Simply loved it , as others have said it really flows nicely and is so enjoyable to read at good pace . Xxx
What a wonderful story of love, passion and a touch of kindness with the characters. I will definitely reread this story again and again.
A terrific story. I have been a closet cd for many years and this has made my panties very wet!🥰
A delightful, story. Sexy, yet sensitive, with a well constructed story-line. i'm a closeted cross-dresser myself and have read many stories on this site over several years, but this is by far the best. It turned me on, made me smile, cry and somehow satisfied me too. Honey, you can write, thankyou!
Had to read in one sitting. Very well written and look forward to the sequel.
Loved the story, your writing lets me feel the scene like I was there and the erotica is fantastic. You put the erotica in Literotica!