All Comments on 'The Sunblade Chronicles Ch. 02'

I'm enjoying this expansion of your tale. Thanks for another entry.

A possible note for futures revisions:

"...He remembered the earlier dreams, though. Elaina, coming to him in his bed, standing over him in just her exquisite skin, asking him what she'd like him to do"

I'm pretty sure you meant "asking him what he'd like her to do". cause, you know, the other makes no sense. Either that or something closer to "telling" should replace "asking".

Why is it that Arans introduction to the chapel and to Elaina seems different in A Paladins Training?