All Comments on 'The Sunroof'

I liked how this story felt 'real' it's the kind of thing most couples can and probably have thought of doing or done.

The only thing you could have done is maybe put the dialogue in quotes instead of the main paragraphs.

But either way it was a good story, thanks for writing it. And if this is in anyway true I hope you both had a good time.:)

Regards

AW

....now quit daydreaming and get a job!!!

I have done it many times. Leave the condom out next time. I know there are different reasons for it, but it is not really required to mention one in a husband and wife backseat story. Wearing one through most of your marriage would suck. I liked it.

Great story!

Loving couple and hot love making!

Well done!