All Comments on 'The Surprise Factor Ch. 03'

Nice new angle on this story. It may be a little weird but it has gotten much more interesting. Looking forward to its continuation.

I am glad that you liked my story!

Pretty stupid............. 2 stars ...........

I started this story when Chapter 1 came out, but couldn’t get past the grammar. Tried again when Chapter 2 came out, but gave up again. Today, when Chapter 3 came out, I tried again, and read all three Chapters. Actually, once you get past the grammar, the story is pretty good. I hope you will continue with this story and give us Chapter 4 soon. Thank you for giving us this story. Good luck.

Besides the headache of the obvious Google translate. You have know idea how to smooth out a story. Your family love story went out the window when we finally deciphered the girlfriends return. Ya goodluck. Hope you eventually get there with writing.

Couldn't even get it straight in my head wtf was what.fucking Abby in ch1 was a drunken oops,but then seeing dad sleeping in the bed with her and the used condom and you're not going ape shit only to be led into an incest cult by whoever is super fucking wtf time.