All Comments on 'The Surprised Attraction Ch. 02'

But, it's moving too slow ... (Just my opinion.)

How long do we have to wait for this to heat up?

I like a slow build-up to get to know the characters, otherwise you don't get a sense of their personalities and they come across as just shallow tools for the sake of porn. And you can find that anywhere. For a story to be more than just the standard fare you need to at least give it some depth, and that's what this build up is doing. It's especially important in a story where believability is needed, such as getting two sisters to interact with each other in a sexual manner that they previously would not have done. Just having two sisters broach a taboo like incest too fast out of nowhere without exploring the nature of the subject and showing no reluctance or pause isn't going to have the impact or depth of a story that explores their personalities and shows the journey getting there.

I plan on having it heat up next chapter, I like to build up before everything starts to happen. Thanks for reading!

Keep up with the story line. Love it

Excellent read again. Really getting into the story and will love to see how it progresses.