All Comments on 'The Surrogate Ch. 04'

time for both of them to get out of dodge

Love your stories, please keep posting!

so many scenarios running through my head!

This series would make a great movie!

It isn't just about the sex - it's about the narrative. You are very gifted xxx

Loving this story. Hope to see many more chapters. I have read and enjoyed many of your stores.

Dear Michele,

This story is getting better and better,especially the love making scene with Peter and Mila.I admired the small details in love making as were described by you.Congrtas again awaiting for the next chapter.

ahaha you motherfucker tell me the secrets!!!! I'm here for this mystery!!!

This would make an awesome screen play even if it had minimal sex in it. You do a really good job of developing your characters and it really makes the reader feel for them. Excellent work! BTW, when is she going to start taking hormones?

Adore how Mila and Peter have become a loving couple!

This by far is one of the best stories I have read here!!! Please keep it going

Keep writing and I will keep reading, amazing stuff! Wish the sex scenes were a bit longer and more detailed but they are certainly not bad, to the contrary! And you legit made an interesting world I am keen to learn more about, my guess is the Ranch is either about porn or more likely prostitution (hence all the secrecy).

Miss Michelle, once again you have a winner. I would read this even if there was NO sex. If you don't write novels, perhaps you should consider it. You are one of the best authors on this site. I am really into this even more than Biker chick. You wrote that one with uncanny accuracy, as I told you before lol.

Sincerely Miss Kira Bangkok