All Comments on 'The Swallow Queen Club Summer'

by worstvacationever

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HeisenhugHeisenhugover 9 years ago

Dang it, small town girl, the sign clearly said not to press the big, red glowing button of doom, but you just had to press it... Now the site has tried to figure by zero and ended up going to plaid.

We need to fix this quick, the ritual requires 3 goats and a small purple wig. Where after we going to get that on short notice?!

TGMarionTGMarionover 9 years ago
I love this story!

I can't wait to see how competitive these girls can become and how eager they are to win.

MarkLazerMarkLazerover 9 years ago
Very good!

Loved the story. I wish I knew if the story was written by a man or a woman. Please update your profile.

AlphaBeatHerAlphaBeatHerover 8 years ago
Nice

Well written and a good swallow story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Boy was that stupid!

And bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I hope to see more of your writing

This is a good story. I hope that you post more.

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