All Comments on 'The Swanmaiden'

Well done!

It took a turn for the best at page one and just kept getting better! I will keep an eye out for any further chapters

Perfect telling of a timeless classic!

Thank you. I hope you and yours are well.

More please!

where this was going, and your technique to build suspense had me going for a moment. I just kept reading and the direction the story was going suddenly materialized. lol

Interesting take and story, one not unlike some elements from two authors here I read, one Glaze72 and Jay... This reminds me quite a bit of Glaze72's style although yours is your own. That aside, I enjoyed the suspense you built up at the front and then, how you made Amelie chase after Morales. I really liked that he was the clueless but gentlemanly guy that just kind of gets caught up in it all. I'm glad this was far more human than "non-human," although it possesses that element. Liked Mitch being drawn out and Amelie being assertive while allowing him to grow into his role.

I don't imagine you are thinking of furthering this tale, but I for one would love to read more.

p.d. What a shame this wasn't written in 2019 or Amelie would have easily qualified as a very credible, realistic, charming and oh-so-sexy nominee for the Sexiest Female.

Well written and thought out! 5

An enchanting and fun (and well-crafted) story. It certainly merits 5 stars!

I feel a little like Mitchell must have, amazed by the beautiful story you have gifted me with.