All Comments on 'The Sweet Smell of Heather'

I can't wait for more of this story

Fantastic story! 5* award from me. The last paragraph hints at a follow on, I do hope so.

Not sure anyone ever experienced the sweet smell of Heather since no one went down on her the entire story. Otherwise, the storyline and sex was good up until Stephan entered the picture. Ass to pussy and back with a cock is a big no no, and not sexy at all.

I haven’t even read the story yet but wanted to leave you a comment to tell you that’s a cool screen name! Now for the reading.

I stopped reading after they had sex for the first time, the sex is very bland. Maybe it's just me but I didn't like some of the words you used in this story, mum is one word that I think will ruin any story and fanny in America means butt so it was very confusing and annoying. I rated it a one. You had me engaged but lost me because the language was so confusing.

Great story. I thought the transition from teasing to sex happened a little quickly, but the hot descriptions of their love making made it a minor concern. The Stefan and his mom showed up and I was treated to my second orgasm on a single story. 5 stars and then some!

Personal preference, I am not a fan of sharing mom with friends, don't know why. I guess it makes it feel like that the mom just wanted young cock instead of wanting her son.

She fucked the friend shortly after meeting him and never told the son, almost felt like cheating. It all worked out in the end but just seemed to take away from the specialness of the mom /son relationship. Especially how it all started felt much more romantic. Just my thoughts.

As ever I enjoyed it very much, and so soon after the last one. Keep up using English English.

One of the best I’ve ever read. And then read again. Please publish part 2.

I find this story unique. I have a small problems with characters changing partners so soon. The fact that they can date in public is a good. I guess as long as they respect, trust, and love each other it is good. I gave this a 4 rating simply because I was a little unsettled about the lack of commitment to the respective mother and son relationship.

I'm not really a fan on mother son stories but what I do like about them is the years of build up or just things getting out of hand because of situations make those stories hot. When you make her such a easy slut and bring in other people it takes away from the story. I prefer one couple per story because it makes it more realistic and not like I reading a bad porn script. Another thing reading this felt stiff, not a good flow and fanny means ass no? I gave it 2 stare

Should have only bern about mom and son and not bring anyone else in very disappointing

Real interesting story line at 1 point I wondered if the writer was going to have the engage in a little lesbian affair so glad he didn't I'm not sure I would have enjoyed the story as much

Loved it please write more

I wouldn't 'loan' my mother to anyone else. It's such a strong bond that wouldn't allow room for another partner. When you find that special/unique person it's a love unlike any other!

This story most definitely needs to be continued!!

Going cunt to arse will lead to infections I'm afraid. Good story otherwise 🔥

WOW!

Damn, talking about getting carried away with the dot dot dots! 6 of them fuckers! I liked it until Stephan got involved and that changed the whole aspect of the story!

Good story. Very hot. Her knee-jerk reaction to him seeing her in a compromising position was very realistic, but when a third was thrown in, and she seemed to take to him too easily. Made mum look a bit slutty. Not so keen on son sharing his mother, especially since they had just started themselves. I would have thought she would have felt a bit more guilt. 4⭐

It started good but it turned me off immediately when the mom bang the friend shortly after met him. As one of commentators said, it seemed the mom just typical slut who just want young cock.

Could have been decent until you brought in the other guy when you brought in another dick you ruined it and made the focus point no longer just that of incest most readers who read a mother and son incest story is men and if there a man they don't wanna read about another dick involved if they do wanna read about that then there dickless and no man

Foxterot7a what do you mean respect trust and love there is no respect there nor was there love you really need to learn what those words mean