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josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Slow-burning story..

Enjoyed reading these...very slow build up, which isn't bad, of course, but a little frustrating! The characters are developing and your are good at 'painting a picture' with words..thanks

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The light flickers from the computer screen, illuminating her eager face as she types out her story, the words flowing onto the page as notes to a symphony, the keyboard her piano, on which she plucks out the melody that will change the world.