by 05Little
It was a good story, I felt like there could of been more character background information and more about the Bill and Nancy relationship.
I really liked this story but I feel that there should be more to this story. Dare I say it ?,I think you could turn the premise into a book!! I'm not kidding and I could help you if you're interested and if you'd like to hear my proposal let me know.
I love all of your stories but this one is my favorite! I love how he takes care of her.