All Comments on 'The Sweetest Ache'

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wmbf2013wmbf2013almost 6 years ago
Too short

It was a good story, I felt like there could of been more character background information and more about the Bill and Nancy relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
are there more parts to this story?

I really liked this story but I feel that there should be more to this story. Dare I say it ?,I think you could turn the premise into a book!! I'm not kidding and I could help you if you're interested and if you'd like to hear my proposal let me know.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
5*

I love all of your stories but this one is my favorite! I love how he takes care of her.

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