All Comments on 'The Sweetest Sin Pt. 01'

Finally a mother-son story with some originality! Thank you.

You should make sure this story gets greater coverage. It’s a world first twins where one is a year younger than the other! Awful. Stopped reading

If Cassie and Jack are twins how is she a year younger?

BIEN. buena puta la madre, mas lenceria, me alegra oir que seran 4 capitulos de la puta barata de la madre

More, please.

Okay, so "..."Fooling around? With your twin brother, Cassie? How much worse would it have got?"..."

Is followed by (referring to Cassie)

"...A year younger than Jack, but much more worldly. I could imagine her drawing him into her little game...."

And both of those come after the mother has stated that they're both "18". So which is it. Are they twin 18 year olds? Is Jack 18, almost 19, and Cassie just barely 18, and "a year older" is a slight overstatement? They obviously can't both be twins and almost a year apart in age though. Not rating as I haven't finished, but I was puzzled by this contradiction.

I enjoyed fully this first installment. It promises. I just wish it isn't one of those stories that seem it is gonna be a love story but end up being a stroke story with women fucking anybody. I wouldn't like the mother to be just a fuck buddy who will fuck not only her son but anybody. I can only wait to find out.

Great story, well paced ,easy to imagine the scene waiting for the promised continuation

How can a twin be a year older?

This is a winner. Very well done. I hope he makes her pregnant.

Very nice, well written. I liked the emotional description's, well done! 5/5.

Getting to the sex scene was convoluted, but from there it was okay other than all the "mommy's". Saying it once would have been enough.

I gave it a 4. Would like to have had the sister removed from the story. Make it a love story between mother and son. If I were the son, I would have verbally claimed her as my woman as I filled her with my baby batter. I would have whispered into her mouth as I came hard and deep in her sopping wet pussy:

"That's my baby batter mom. The baby batter that is going to give you, my child. Let me fuck my baby in you mom."

Any woman will tell you that when a man whom she is in love with tells her as he is cumming in her...."I want to put my baby in you" will cum all over the sheets. A mother hearing her son telling her that he wants to father a baby with her....she would cum for days.

Love to idea of mom's thick blonde muff!! Love eating her hairy pussy!!

Pressed all my buttons. Good 1st job.

Fix the twin issue, and write your own story - ignore suggested story lines.

5*

Enjoyed the story and hope there are more chapters to come! I think his sister should join in too!

There are a few errors firstly, you say that Cassie and Jack are twins then you say that Cassie is a year older than Jack. After that the mother refers to Jack as "my first born". So which is it? Are they twins? Or is Cassie older or younger than Jack?

Son was a year older, a year younger and a twin…figure it out.

Isn't it obvious? Jack has to travel in time into the future to impregnate his mother, who then gives birth to the child that will save the world from ...

OK, guilty as charged. How embarrassing. The moderator demaned that I clarify a question related to the ages, and in my haste to clarify in one part, I unclarified in another. Thanks very much everyone who spotted it and I hope it hasn't spoiled the effect too much.

Needless to say, I will return to repair the anomaly in the space-time fabris

Just to make super-clear: They're twins! They're twins! 18-year-old twins!

Delicious!

5 Stars!

How is she a year younger if jacks her twin brother>?

Good story. Thanks.

what happen the daughter?

The story went pretty fast from a woman who had no intimacy to one who was trying to seduce her son. There was basically no communication between the mother and son before the sex happens. Also, there was no mention of the religious values they would have grappled with to begin a relationship like that. The premise is good and the tale is intriguing but if you want a truly good story you have to dig deeper into humanity and probably religious/Biblical nature. Keep up the good work. 4/5

You messed up on the twins years but that's alright still good story!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow lol Five Stars!

A dark and stormy night? Seriously? Stopped right there. /sigh

Thanks to the author for such a great story. I love that mom went from shocked by incest to achieving the intensity of the incest orgasm. The love as mom lays back on her bed and spreads her thighs as her own son returns to his mothers womb as a man. I loved that no protection was worn and mom accepts not one but two forbidden creampies from her son. I look forward to part 2 and there are so many directions this story can go…assuming that young Jack continues to fill his mothers unprotected womb with his seed how many months before the son gets to hear those fantastic words “son you made your mother pregnant”. Also will the sister walk in on her brother fucking her mother? Will she seduce her brother and fuck him before or after she discovers he’s been pounding his mothers pussy? Will Jack impregnate both his mom and sister? So many possibilities.. I for one hope for a happy ending where the son lays in the master bed and watches as both mom and sister walk into the bed room both wearing sexy lingerie and both heavily pregnant. Mom can then turn to her daughter and say to young Jack “ you naughty boy look what you have done to your family, you have not only knocked up both your mom and sister and turned us both into incestious sluts, but at the same time you have brought out family together as a truly loving family”

I like the story / author very well so far; I am presently pausing from reading to rate the story, I will explain, then I will return to reading it.

First, I am an extreme fan of women who deliberately and on purpose, are daily in possession of thick hairy mounds of fur on their pussies. Therefore, I DO NOT think the following descriptive statement made by the author of this story exists. That statement of description was "Unfashionably thick blonde bush." Sorry author, but I rated quickly this story a five because of the mental image (SEXY and GREAT) that statement instantly produced. Moreover, I did so before I ever finished reading the story ("THANK YOU," FOR HOW YOU WORDED THAT), because all bushes, from the thick and slightly trimmed ones to the sexy and beautiful soft, thick, full bushes that are completely untrimmed are very fashionable. I love to see sexy bushes of all shades and colors spilling out the top and sides of panties that are one size too small. I was recently - probably 2 years ago at my favorite Lodging / Condo in Myrtle Beach (you do understand I can't be specific with the name or even the exact location). There was a wedding that had happened earlier that same day and family members, males and females and all over 18 were gathered at the indoor pool about 7:00 pm. I was blown away by all the sexy lady fur - bush that was intentionally and purposefully on display. Thick pussy hair was spilling out of the top and both sides of two-piece bikinis on 13 ladies who walking around the pool proudly displaying them. Bikini lines were not trimmed on these 13 as if this had been planned, like some kind of contest. PMG the ones getting n and out of the pool (shiny and wet pussy hair tufts hanging out from the sides of their bikini's). The best part of the evening was when a guy (probably 28-32 years old) pointed at a very sexy looking woman's genital area as he said very breathlessly, his voice shaking / trembling, to the lady (his wife-GF?) that was with him, "Look _____, my sister has more hair on her pussy than you do." The lady he said that to replied, "See if she wants to spend tonight in our room, and yes I do mean in our bed without clothes." "MMMmm, My sister," he said with his voice trembling. "I will if she will, and if you two don't mind. Fuck, I love her sexy feet and toes" said the lady in a low tone as she grinned. Even with the echos in the pool area, I heard them. I also watched everyone admiring all of the sexy multicolored bushes that ranged from deep blond and caramel-colored mounds to brown ones (most were brown), to the (4) dark jet-black shiny ones. Two ladies had pit hair (black) untrimmed. There were also 5 ladies who were obviously shaven walking around with talking with the others. Most of the husbands / males seemed to enjoy camping (NEARLY ALL HAD PITCHED TENTS IN THE FRONT OF THEIR SWIMMING TRUNKS). I am now going to return to the reading and finish this already rated and, "five rated hairy pussy" story.