by Grayson_James
This story from the daughter's point of view is even better & sexier than the first installment. I cannot wait to read the third!!!
As someone who has also spent an awful lot of time on writing these kinds of stories, I can understand your frustration at not getting much feedback on your work. But believe me when I tell you that you DO have an audience out here and we ARE eager to read the next installment. PLEASE keep writing on this series. At the very least *I* will comment on each one.<Br><Br>
This tale is both compelling and erotic. To let it fall by the wayside is an injustice to yourself as a writer and the characters you've so deftly crafted.
This is the most believable story I've read on this site to date. You've done an excellent job of character development. You just need to finish it.
Where is part 3 . This is a great story ! I can’t wait for the next one . a