All Comments on 'The Sweetest Taste Ch. 02'

by Grayson_James

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Better than the original!

This story from the daughter's point of view is even better & sexier than the first installment. I cannot wait to read the third!!!

nightshadownightshadowover 15 years ago
PLEASE do continue!!

As someone who has also spent an awful lot of time on writing these kinds of stories, I can understand your frustration at not getting much feedback on your work. But believe me when I tell you that you DO have an audience out here and we ARE eager to read the next installment. PLEASE keep writing on this series. At the very least *I* will comment on each one.<Br><Br>

This tale is both compelling and erotic. To let it fall by the wayside is an injustice to yourself as a writer and the characters you've so deftly crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice

This is the most believable story I've read on this site to date. You've done an excellent job of character development. You just need to finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep going

Great start! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice

you have to continue this story for your readers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yet another abandoned story

Authors like you should be shot

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Where is part 3 . This is a great story ! I can’t wait for the next one . a

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I can’t wait for part 3. Great story

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