All Comments on 'The Swim Team Ch. 02'

by SolarRay

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
OK 2nd chapter

really hope the story gets some sex action, and soon. Perhaps group sex in the locker room showers after practice?

SolarRaySolarRayalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Coming...

Coming up next, stay tuned... :)

ReedRichardsReedRichardsalmost 8 years ago
I gave both chapters a 5

This story is totally unrealistic . . . and I loved it!

FASfanFASfanalmost 8 years ago
A delightful fantasy romp!

I enjoyed every highly unlikely word of it! Please bring us more soon. Five stars.

MicroronMicroronalmost 8 years ago
Absolutely Fun

I'm in my 70's and just had a great smile and chuckle... I remember those feelings of initial awkwardness about nudity in the locker room then later in life my wife and I enjoyed nudity on our boat. Our girls grew up knowing that Mom & Dad were comfortable being seen naked. I still press the boundaries of public consciousness by wearing a thong on many socially conservative beaches on Vancouver Island

Unfortunately we are a long way from Wreck Beach and surrounding area where nudity is expected and well tolerated... Best wishes to the author for a tasteful yet titillating finish to this story!

penguinacepenguinacealmost 8 years ago
Nice

You get 5 stars for the phone call alone. Hilarious.

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
Fast chapter

Now for some fast lap times, hope the boys swim straight.

Anyone see our Olympic swimmers in trials, those girls have some shoulders

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Sweet

Awkwardness, acceptance of their own nudism, romance - you are tying a nice package. I'm looking forward to the continuations.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 8 years ago
It keeps getting better

OK, now you have my full attention. Looking forward to Chapter 3.

jonyoungaujonyoungaualmost 8 years ago

that's one way to find out your parents are nudists.....

UncertainTUncertainTabout 2 years ago

This is a really fun premise.

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I am a sex-positive nudist who enjoys working with themes of sexual discovery, exploration, and the fear of first time nudity as experienced through scenarios of exhibitionism, voyeurism, and group sex. I try to write characters that become liberated through transformative sce...

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