The Swim Team Ch. 11

Wow! What a story, what a series. Strong characters with loads of side stories. 5* and favorite without question. Just a pity it took 11 chapters for Barry to finally fuck Linda...

I couldn't say it any better than the rest of the comments.

Always leave them wanting more. Reading the comments I agree with the others. Matt.Weiner, on ending a series. You leave the character's here for all time.

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OMG! This series was incredible. Emotionally charged and intense sex. WE MUST HAVE MORE!!!

This is an excellent well developed story with a strong interesting and unexpected plot. A sequel/follow up would be much appreciated. Plenty of unanswered questions but that does not detract from the story line or the plot. Author should consider publishing on, say, Amazon. Well done.

Well done. Not an easy thing to get me to say about something that's not CNC or BDSM.

I'm... extremely picky when it comes to actual relationships, which is why almost none of the stuff I read on LE has actual... romance? Relationships? Happy endings? Fiction is almost exclusively either overly contrived drama or so easy and cheesy it makes my skin crawl. Your characters largely behaved the way people should, imo. No sudden jumps or leaps in emotion. No unbelievable grudges or blatantly unrealistic acceptance.

You definitely left room for a sequel. Hope you write one. If not... I kind of understand that, too. Sometimes the characters have grown enough that it's better to just put the story to rest than destroy their progress, your work by making new conflict.

Many thanks Ark, for an enjoyable series. (As far fetched as it was!) Perhaps I lost track a bit... The diary seemed to stop at the part where Carrie had spent an entire year seeing if she could abstain form sex with other people. So we didn't get HER version of what happened once she got back together with Barrie and the incident with Freddy. We were told by Kelly that Dennis was not Linda's bio father. It was Freddy. Also that Kelly was unsure if Carrie had had sex with Freddy but her and Dennis were "busy" at the time and couldn't be certain.

Barrie had told Kelly that, no matter what, HE was Brenda's father but... we never get that confirmed via the diary. Also, that last chapter was the one that stretched believability to the limits. He's 26 years older than Linda! Yeah, no cause for concern. Ha. Lots of other loose ends to tie up regarding the girls from the swim team, the cam whores and "Mistress" situation.

Interesting that this is the final chapter as there are still a lot of unanswered questions here. Good read but felt like it was building to more

Very special, such engaging story telling.

Made me care, made me cry, made me hard and most of all made me want more.

I loved the complexity and the many possible paths not pursued.

I'm sad it's over! That was the length of a novel almost, and I loved every page. I still wonder who fucked Barry at the last party in the dark. Maybe Brenda? Maybe not. A very refreshing healing from past losses and fresh May/December love. I very much look forward to more from these characters. I'm also loving Raine's story in your other series, and how these two sagas tie together. It seems Raine knows Brenda, and they all live close together in Houston possibly, if the HS mentioned is a real school.