by Chile Peeler
Thnx Chile for going back at work !!
Was nice to see Jonas and folks again for some new actions :)
When (not if) you continue this, please take the time necessary to make it another of your 10+ page epics. I can't tell you how much more I enjoy reading a story that goes on for 10+ pages than something that's over in half a page, even if theres 20 parts, each half a page. 1 really long story is much better than 20 short chapters. These really should be filed under Novels and Novellas, but I'm glad you filed it under incest so I could find it more easily. :)
I loved all the erotic detail and talking dirty to each other!! You really deserve praise for the exquisite, erotic description of their every move and thought as they fucked and sucked each other.
I just think Jonas and Lance should chill, breakdown and be willing to lick thier cum off lovely Nikki's face and tits. Snowballing is so erotic and depraved, they don't know what they are missing , whether it be thier own cum or their brother's. And just think how hot it would make Nikki !!!
Your a fine writer...I hope you will give us Part 2 soon. I did so enjoy getting off while reading your work...thank you.
Everything of yours that I have read, I positively love.. Have jacked off countless times. Just can't help myself.. You don't s'pose Jonas and Lance might just have a little m/m action do you?
This whole storyline is epically sexy - one of the best stories on here. Why didn't you go any further with it?
There's something so outrageously depraved and sordid about this series of stories. It's a real shame you stopped writing.
But I like it. Amazing storytelling narrative and it was definitely fun taking this ride with you.