All Comments on 'The Swingers' Daughter'

by SlonEazy

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imurddyimurddyover 4 years ago
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My friend, your description of the early years was great, then you got to the sex and rushed it. I wanted to give you a good rating, but the story fell flat.

SlonEazySlonEazyover 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the input. I can't disagree. I'm somewhere between too much and too little. Still searching for "Just Enough."

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
looking forward to more

and i agree with the comment about rushing it

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Retired military. Old man with many years of sexual imagination, curiosity and experience. My stories will include much truth and more fantasy. Interest and experience include wife sharing, incest and groups. Bi-sexual curious.

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