All Comments on 'The switch'

I've wanted the same thing, to fuck Rick my dad. Hot story. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail. Hit m up...dad

A few too many spelling errors. Also, you're supposed to put a comma at the end of the quotation when someone is talking, which you failed to do at all. Tighten up your editing and you'll have a good story.

So fucking hot! I just wish that it was longer. You could have had Em tell Kat that she needed her help to fuck her dad in a week and then show us day by day how she teased her dad like crazy. Five stars and a favorite point!

Give that sweet daughter what she wants!

Keep them coming 👍👍

Love to see more of this. Perhaps daughter moving into dad’s room, turning up pregnant, Kat moving in after she turns up pregnant, maybe Kat marries dad, or perhaps a Kat marries Em, perhaps the other girls want to get fucked again or bred too?

he needs to get Em and all 3 friends pregnant.

Ya mean, such as Dad losing 5 pounds in the course of the story?

just a guy who reads erotica for erotica and I think you're doing a great job! You sir have a wonderful mind!

So fucking HOT!

The story was ok, but why do we have the ten inch cock fantasy. I've fucked lot if guys most 6, some 7, sometimes 8. But ten inches? Be realistic. The story would have been fine with 8.

Who are these anonymous idiots that can’t recognize a “one and done”?

Too many stories here drag on into oblivion.

Picasso once said, “A true artist knows when to stop painting”.

You stopped at the perfect time.

It was only after I got to the bottom of the first page, I realised this hot story was written by you.

God I hope there is a part two to this masterpiece :P

I'm sure the story was hot to some. It seemed over the top in my opinion.

I love a good Daddy/Daughter story

I so hope you continue this story it’s so hot and want to know the next pat as see where it goes

FATHER WAS A MANSLUT

HOT!