All Comments on 'The Switch Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pretty good so far. Looking forward to more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My 2 cents

I liked this story. 5/5 stars. I liked the story line and the characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430about 2 years ago

Yep; I want to hear this plan too. Good story. Thanks.

KumakunshuKumakunshuabout 2 years ago

I really like this one! More please! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 years ago

Sounds like you are introducing us to another lovable couple (or two) great start. Would like to know more about Mom and Dad. Looking forward to continuing this saga.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Yep, as others have said, can't wait for the next chapters. My only nitpick is they refer to each other as big brother and little sister, however they are twins. It took me out of the story briefly as I thought it was inconsistent with the story line. Perhaps work something into the story that he came out first and he has teased her about being the oldest, or something like that. Hope the next chapter comes out soon. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Glad to have you back and writing for us perverts.:) 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I do love your story telling but hate that you don't release all the chapters at once. I'm very impatient but that's not your fault. So I'll be over here waiting for my next fix😂

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really good start. I agree with the big brother/little sister comment, it interrupted the flow. I guess either he came out first or is just due to their size differences. But that's just a small thing. Story is good and hot, looking forward to the next installment.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 2 years ago

Looks good. Will be eager to see what happens.

bxtreme4bxtreme4about 2 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Could have done without the anal, but you do you.

josenussbaumjosenussbaumalmost 2 years ago

I cant help it, but I HATE cheating.

And Alex/Annie are clearly cheating on Dani/Derrick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Its annoying that you have him call her his little/Baby sister when they are twins.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

While keeping in mind that this is an incest story what kind of weirdos listen to their siblings having sex?

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Author's note: I had several comments about the Dom/sub part of the story. I don't want to give anything away, but many of your worries are addressed in Chapter 4. The story was fully complete when I released the first chapter, so I'm not changing anything. However, I would a...

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