by behindhandwriter
My 2 cents
I liked this story. 5/5 stars. I liked the story line and the characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and your imagination.
Sounds like you are introducing us to another lovable couple (or two) great start. Would like to know more about Mom and Dad. Looking forward to continuing this saga.
Cheers
SAGE
Yep, as others have said, can't wait for the next chapters. My only nitpick is they refer to each other as big brother and little sister, however they are twins. It took me out of the story briefly as I thought it was inconsistent with the story line. Perhaps work something into the story that he came out first and he has teased her about being the oldest, or something like that. Hope the next chapter comes out soon. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I do love your story telling but hate that you don't release all the chapters at once. I'm very impatient but that's not your fault. So I'll be over here waiting for my next fix😂
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Really good start. I agree with the big brother/little sister comment, it interrupted the flow. I guess either he came out first or is just due to their size differences. But that's just a small thing. Story is good and hot, looking forward to the next installment.
I cant help it, but I HATE cheating.
And Alex/Annie are clearly cheating on Dani/Derrick.
Its annoying that you have him call her his little/Baby sister when they are twins.
While keeping in mind that this is an incest story what kind of weirdos listen to their siblings having sex?