All Comments on 'The Tabitha Files Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good

Not as good as chapter 01 but enjoyable. He should have poked his fingers up her butthole while in the doggy position. Future chater?

2 stars

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
"... as I struggled to breath. ..."

BREATHE!

DazmanDazmanover 5 years agoAuthor
DragonRider55

You desperately need an editor to help you improve your pedantic, but otherwise useless, feedback.

I believe the word you need is “chapter” not “chater”.

Quality of feedback? Zero stars.

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