All Comments on 'The Tableau That is Lisa Ch. 01'

It's Velma, not Thelma. AND it really should be Jamie and me in this sentence.

figure out how to edit after publication. It has a few typos, and needs a few more paragraph breaks as well.

On another site someone posted this joke:

Top three ways to get your story noticed.

#3. Write thoughtful, insightful prose.

#2. Include a picture of your cat.

#1. Make a simple and obvious typographical error.

You read my story! I love you for that.

Lisa Ann

Thanks for another one, Tex! You keep writing and I’ll keep reading typo’s and all. Bit of a since of humor showing through in this one!

On to chapter 2

Just wanted to say that I enjoyed your style and voice. You have a unique story telling voice, one with wit and obvious intelligence as fuel. I've also enjoyed your comments on the forum, probably for the same reasons ;)