by RedDusker
This was a great first chapter, and I hope we get more going forward. The sex scene was really well done and the dirty talk was a lot of fun. Some interesting characters and a good setup so far. Hope we get more of this story!
Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you liked the characters and the story. You'll definitely get more, the second chapter is already done and being revised.
Great story, I loved it. Can’t wait for the story to continue and hopefully the other characters will come into it more as well.
I loved the originals and not gonna lie they left me unsettled but so far this rewrite is a lot better than the last one you recently deleted. I know I’m probably gonna get stories mixed but is there anyway you have the old stories on file that you could send me or repost? If not then that’s cool I can’t wait for the next chapters :) keep it up!!
i love where this is going but I really want more, I know this was a little over a year ago but I think many would be grateful for the rest of the story I’d even pay for it if I’m being honest.