All Comments on 'The Talk'

I liked the buildup and the anticipation I felt ... until I came to the end ... and it was over way too soon ... there was no detail to the emotions of the act itself to make this a great story

.....what CAME next and how it felt.

Happy you started the action with intercourse--Most often it is the first step. I laugh at the stories where it starts with a supurb BJ. She sucks him dry and then he immediately proceeds to do her.

Maybe but not me--I need recovery time

GREAT STORY, WELL WRITTEN........THE ENDING A LET DOWN

It is a well written story but the end just leaves me waiting for the other half. There is another part, right?

Understand about the comments on the ending. Yes, the intention was for another part to follow. But also, I had worked over a few days on the story (more than 8 hours in all, which I have no idea whether this is a lot or not but it seemed that way to me), and I was ready to get it out there.

Also, what about an ending happening when the female orgasms? That is what happened here.

Appreciate all of the feedback!

But, yes, I too would have enjoyed a more played out ending.

Isn't it great when the bitch lets the slut inside her out and she just has to fuck, she's letting her cunt do all the thinking now! All the better when the lucky recipient of her horniness is her son - very slutty!

write less; say more, dude

It is so pleasurable to have Sex with Mom ... teaching and pleasure comes in hand in hand

Jack knows where a boy's creamy semen belongs--in his own mother's cunt, over and over again.

Very intense but equally short.

I enjoyed this, I prefer a good build up, the actual sex is less important to me, leaves my imagination to go places you might not!!! I want the part where they decide they can't resist crossing that line!!!

Very disappointed at the abrupt ending. Even if a part 2 is coming, this should have gone a little further.

I used to enjoy spying on mom 😉

Brief observation. I have only recently discovered your stories (it was the "Agreement"). And with every new author I like to read their stories, ordered by their submission dates. So far it seems you lack the ability to finish a story. Which is odd because I did enjoy the "Agreement" series which you seemed to finish just fine.