by TarnishedPenny
Very, very good. You might try submitting for publication. Or converting to a script. Good luck.
5*. (not enough)
Tc
Fun. And well written. One of these days, I will have to try writting a detective story.
Excellent whodunit. A female protagonist made the story pop. Tough as nails PI with a sharp mind and a healthy libido. 007's PPK was a nice touch.
Your ability to make excellent, compelling stories from completely different times, places and circumstances, with a wide variety of human personalities is astounding.
Again many thanks for a great tale.
Very good story. The erotica was well done but the story would have still been a good one without it.
Very good, very compelling, not sure it’s fully in the vein of Spillane & Co tho. Still 5⭐️ mind you, I was very entertained and it was all for free don’t forget, thanks, Ppfzz.
*****That was a very entertaining P I story wish you would have did some follow-ups. Thanks for sharing.