All Comments on 'The Tall Open Window'

by TarnishedPenny

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ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 2 years ago

Nice work, TP, and a nice touch to make it "today noir".

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 2 years ago

Great job. Mickey would be proud. 5 well-earned stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very, very good. You might try submitting for publication. Or converting to a script. Good luck.

5*. (not enough)

Tc

RRC2RRC2over 2 years ago

I loved it. Great story

THANKS

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 2 years ago

Fun. And well written. One of these days, I will have to try writting a detective story.

DarkChocolate9DarkChocolate9over 2 years ago

Excellent whodunit. A female protagonist made the story pop. Tough as nails PI with a sharp mind and a healthy libido. 007's PPK was a nice touch.

valkoinenvalkoinenabout 2 years ago

Your ability to make excellent, compelling stories from completely different times, places and circumstances, with a wide variety of human personalities is astounding.

Again many thanks for a great tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good story. The erotica was well done but the story would have still been a good one without it.

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 1 year ago

Very good, very compelling, not sure it’s fully in the vein of Spillane & Co tho. Still 5⭐️ mind you, I was very entertained and it was all for free don’t forget, thanks, Ppfzz.

chytownchytown3 months ago

*****That was a very entertaining P I story wish you would have did some follow-ups. Thanks for sharing.

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