by BengalTiger33
welcome back, nice to see a story being carried on even after an extended break. Good show
I found this story on the website. Very well written and you developed the characters very well. The reader was involved with the characters and the story moved along. The story itself is the best part as it builds the reader to your conclusion. Well done. 5*
It's been over 2 and a half years since Chapter 6, so this is going to be yet another of those bloody annoying unfinished stories that plague this site, isn't it !
Rapier
I read thru all the comments once I finished this last chapter. Then I checked the dates. I'm not a writer but I would think that the writers here write for a variety of reasons. While I'm a bit disappointed at how this ended, I'm grateful for the last chapter anyway. The first five chapters were reasonably spaced. The last took nearly 18 months.
Thanks for giving us some kind of closure even if it was in each of our heads. Seems like maybe it was tough.
Zeke
why end it like this we (the readers) need more of these two please
My name is Nathalie and this story turns me on more than anything. However, it's been more than five years since i finished reading this. I've re-read this for the nth time, still waiting for the next chapter...