All Comments on 'The Taping of Ava Pt. 01'

Pretty Good. It gives a Hentai vibe. Love it. Are you going for a Tsundere (Innocent to corrupt), or full fledged blackmail genre? lol I don't see it as rape. Girl has a drunk night. Makes a mistake. Dominatric type woman blackmails innocent girl to have her channel get more views. All with consent . Love it.

I'll vote when I see part 2.

Pretty hot but missing a few commas. I am curious also how this story unfolds. Checked your page for more only to find out you are new. Will there be other projects other than TTA.

I have a few other stories in my mind. I mean I process fantasies like 24/7. lol. But I do have two. The Taping of Ava. has a part 2 that is a quarter done. I just been busy resubmitting this one. Now that I what Literotica wants in terms of editing I'll release part 2 and maybe 3 every Thursday to Saturday.(Spoiler alert: I'm thinking of a spin off featuring The Taping of Chloe or something along that title. I don't watch Hentai or animation but I love stories production from Marc Dorcel.

This is pretty good. you are missing submission. This should have been tagged in submission. Would have hit the right audience.

My girl and I role play Ava and Anna sex scene. My girl is now into sniffing my vagina while I'm on my laptop